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Chayne Harralki
12-09-2007, 01:29
As most of you know, I write the odd bit of SG fiction. I originally started to provide a background for my character and got it just escalated.

The thing is, like any writer or artist, I do like for readers to comment on what I've written - good or bad - just to let me know what I've done right or what I've done wrong.

See, I have this Jonas-fic in the works based in the time period Langara was occupied by the Orii and I was wondering if anyone was interested in it. I'll be posting it up in pieces - no getting eye strain! - and would love for you all to let me know what you think about it. But I'll only post up if people want to read it. If not, let me know and I'll keep me fics to meself! :D

*huggles her prose folder*

Mine...my own...my Precious... :p

Tristan Avalon
12-09-2007, 04:24
LOL I would love to read it Chayne! I've been thinking about riting my own, but dont know how to get started. So maybe I could learn a thing or two from you, if you dont mind!

Privaten
12-09-2007, 04:24
Yes. that would be great. I love fan fiction

Chayne Harralki
02-25-2008, 14:38
For want of somewhere else to post this (and because Dave was gonna cry if I didn't save it somewhere), I wrote this in the chatbox...


And so...
The day turns silent as the valiant dwell in other worlds...
Drawn into the world of Morpheus by desperate need...
Yet each mind turns to the same single thought...
For tomorrow the great adventure begins again...
Tomorrow the brave and true shall prepare anew...
Tomorrow those selfless souls shall set out upon the journey...
The journey they can never cease to travail
Until then, until the new day dawns, they sleep...
The honourable, the just, the strong, the wise, the kind, the great...
The great warriors of heart, mind and soul...
The warriors of the SGC

An extra little verse from...somewhere...:

A lot of us aren't invisible...
We just sometimes wish we were
To make our lives seem different
To become one with the 'verse
Our lives cannot be erased
Our selves cannot be taken
For in every breath that we take
We are one
We are the Universe
And in the Universe are we eternal

SG-Ubik
02-25-2008, 14:48
I wasn't gonna cry! Just... get a little upset, that's all... *shifty eyes*

Tristan Avalon
02-25-2008, 15:33
Ack!!!! I love that! It's awesome!!!!

Canto
02-25-2008, 16:08
oo, a fic about me? :D

Just kidding ... :P

I'd love to read something new, I know I dont usualy comment on Fanficts, but that is because all I normaly have to say is "awesome" :P and I dont usualy spam. But keep em comming !

Chayne Harralki
10-03-2008, 14:46
Another little poem moment...


Never wilt thee all see
A truer face that is me,
Ever the fixéd smile for thee
No other emotion can be free.
Throughout mine soul as thorny thread,
Beating painéd drums inside mine head.
Mine eye never a sorrowed tear shall shed,
For mine heart ever more hath grieven bled.

Tristan Avalon
10-03-2008, 15:09
The poems are so different from your fanfics it takes me twice to read them. :p But they are definitely just as good. :D

paulo1274
10-03-2008, 17:11
Post away your fics are always great and we all love reading them :)

Katilan
10-03-2008, 17:18
I second what Paulo said. *raises hand*

Darren
10-03-2008, 17:19
I would if I had the time.
(just trying to help motivate :D)